Persuasive Writting

Jessica Takayama
KMLA
130807

Dear, Mom

I am writing this letter because, I believe that my mom should not tell me to lose weight. Many experts like Doctor Lee, for example agree with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
The first reason is because even though my mom doesn't need to say it I can lose weight by my self. There are statics to show this is true, according to Doctor Lee weight loss isn't exactly easiest thing to do. It's annoying. When ever your parents says lose weight you get stressed. Also you have to put all this effort forward making changes to your comfortable.
The second reason is because when ever my mom say just give up it just pisses me off. You know when you're only eating salad and go to exercise for 2~3 hours, and  come back home all relaxed and suddenly mom saying to just give up cause she thought I was just relaxing on the coach rolling on the sofa watching TV. Also when your mom asks you what were you doing and you say I went to the gym and exercised she won't believe me, and that would cause stress and also you could actually give up on diet.

The final reason is because when ever you go out with your friends my mom runs and say how much did you eat, or ask me to go on the scale. She does this every time when I go out with my friends, I can do this by myself I am old enough. Well let me give you some facts to support this reason. Well first of all most of my friends are skinny and they don't really eat much, I understand that you would think so what but that's the point. I get stressed when I see skinny people besides me naturally I would start eat less. Why do you think it is........  it is because you get effected by the person besides you and try to eat less.
As you can see, my mo should not tell me to lose weight. Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view.

Sincerely,
Jessica Takayama